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April 08, 2007

Templar: It's up!

Hooray!

Posted by Spike at April 8, 2007 11:15 PM

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It's rare these days that I ever really laugh at comics, but I admit freely that I laughed at these past two pages. Wonderfully dirty humor that manages to stay above the insipid trashiness one would expect with such content, and instead providing a genuinely funny moment. Good work.

Posted by Ana at April 8, 2007 11:25 PM
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Yay, cunt a' science!

Posted by Alan Tyson at April 9, 2007 12:22 AM
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Speaking directly into his hands without facing anyone-- easily the best part.

"that is the sort of person you are."

Laughed SO hard.
It's so calmly delivered... I love Scip.

Posted by Libby at April 9, 2007 04:48 AM
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I'm having a lot of trouble working out who is saying what in the last panel.

Posted by David at April 9, 2007 10:00 AM
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Aw, really? Well, it'll get cleared up on the next page, but thanks for the crit. Something to fix for the print edition...

Posted by spike at April 9, 2007 10:15 AM
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I too have problem understanding who's saying what in the lower part of the page (and what the "ow !" are all about) , but I don't think it needs fixing. I thought it was intentional, and would be explained on the next page.

Actually if I was reading this in a book, I wouldn't spend time wondering about this, because I'd go directly to the next page. This one-page-at-a-time thing changes completely the way the story is perceived.

Posted by Wood at April 9, 2007 11:43 AM
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Cunt a'Science. Yeah...I love the total record-needle scratch denouement of this gag, after the description of the Cock of Science, which was accompanied by a pretty harsh, thumping pron-music soundtrack in my head.


OK.. You know what I want to be happening in that last panel? Though I know it's not gonna be the case 'cause it doesn't really follow, but... I want whoever's saying "ow" (I think it's Scip) to be saying "ow" because they're being jabbed in the arm with the Cock of Science.


BTW...did you know your blog rejects posts containing the word pron spelled correctly?

Posted by stacey at April 9, 2007 12:25 PM
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Scip: Blah blah blah cooks
Ray: Drop it
Scip: blah blah cooks
*unknown development*
Scip: OW!

Im pretty sure thats how its going =D

Posted by Vaughn at April 9, 2007 06:40 PM
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That second panel has just made my day. And the pause in the first panel sets it up so well. I love this comic.

Posted by Smashy at April 9, 2007 10:41 PM
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I think she's about to make Scip cry. Poor Scip.

Posted by Rachael S. at April 10, 2007 11:28 AM
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I love you Spike. I love you down to my humerus. You've made my day. Thank you.

Posted by Nate at April 11, 2007 02:00 AM
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Sooo... did the book go to the printers as intimated a few blogs back? Production journal update soon? You're not busy, right?

Posted by nanojath at April 11, 2007 10:16 AM
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I love Scip too! it's the bets!

Posted by Yura Krem at April 11, 2007 11:08 AM
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I don't think that last panel is Scip and Reagan, because that building's not Kingdom Come. See, Spike, you may hate drawing architecture, but it comes in handy when you're setting your locations. :) Besides, I love the look of the buildings in this city.

Posted by Bex at April 12, 2007 11:22 AM
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Oh, and the t-shirt? On the front it says:
Let the Cock of Science fuck you!

and on the back:
...or the cunt of science, if that's your thing.

Posted by Bex at April 12, 2007 11:25 AM
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I think the shirt needs some of the Cock o' Science's selling points enumerated upon it.

Particularly "It's like boning the future", and "Texturized Pleasure Nublets".

Posted by Cylver at April 13, 2007 04:25 AM
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I made an icon. I couldn't help it.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v502/touchagrae/Templar.gif

Posted by CailinLiath at April 13, 2007 10:54 AM
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